The peer revision was helpful once again. It told be what i knew of already knew but what i needed to be told. I should of started off with better topic. This paper wold of been much much much easier. I was just trying to do something different , but it did not pay off this time at all. At the beginning it really did make sense to me like at least in my head it all fit together, i just can't get my idea and thought across clearly. I am currently sitting in the laundry room, still trying to revise my whole paper.