The essay i turned in for Unit one was a piece of crap. I obviously didn't try very hard on it. It wasn't even argumentative, it was just information about myself. It wasn't well written it was pretty boring. It was interesting to read though. It had a message of change at the end of it, and i really think that that change has happened. I actually want to be proud of whatever i turn in now, and not just do the least amount of work possible.I still need much improvement.